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- Falling -
by: Lingk
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lingk8 Oct 2003, 15:46 Here is a nother poem every one :)
- Falling -
Sleepless nights are always filled with you. The times we had were so great, so happy and now so sad. Gave up looking, too tired to try, nothing works in the end. Shining stars in the night’s sky hold what joy I have left in a life worth nothing. I’m hoping to move on, but still here. Too poor to give and too proud to take, every day something new but still the same, all motivation has left. Let’s lay here and die, turn to dust and see the world in the wind. Too late to make it, just give up. Come to me it’s ok, so don’t delay. The time is right for shooting the night sky with love. All gone and wanting more, the night light is still on, the bed still warm. Emptiness is still around, to bad, it’s sad. Cheer up, new day, new times, new thoughts, new life of happiness soon to be gone.
let me know what you think.David McGowan9 Oct 2003, 00:15 Pretty deep stuff you got there. Although i think most of use who's loved and lost can relate to it. when its happening to you , it feels like its the end , and nothing will ever be the same.. yeah well. nice work bro.
You should see about getting some of these published.
David :lol:lingk9 Oct 2003, 01:00 thanks, I would, but I don't have the money to :( and I really don't know ware to look to get it done for free :angry:
one day, one day :wub: