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by mel david
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Mel David1 Oct 2003, 00:44 Hey trancemeisters,
Here's a track I produced last year that I've been meaning to produce properly but just been too lazy to get round to it.
I think it's quite cute and catchy and fun to listen to so might be good played at a rave environment for the kiddies.
Anyhow your feedback is eagerly sought and perhaps you could throw a few suggestions and comments this way.
Click on the smilie below to get to the download page.
Danke, das ist alles.
[image]David McGowan1 Oct 2003, 01:00 I think the beat needs to be a little louder and also clearer. Your main synth is nice but might have a tad too much delay its sounds ok tho. i would considered this happy Drum and bass, its too fast for trance.
DavidTranceSynthVania1 Oct 2003, 02:53 wow, very fast drum and bass style.. the sine-like lead thing is cool tho
the HiHat did not really fit in imo.. If you would create a real DnB track with some wicked DnB drums, this would be awesome
I think it's an okey track, but as stated, it would be much better with some wild crazy drum & bass drums and bass.
keep it up!BALLISTIC SOLUTION1 Oct 2003, 09:26 i liked it... clean it up a bit & bring out the drums & bass line... personally, i'd add some vocal samples to it, not like singing or anything, but some spoken-word stuff, or movie samples...but, that's just me...DjDaed1 Oct 2003, 19:54 Good track. Could use a bit more work though. I would recomend to a friend.Lithius3 Oct 2003, 00:20 Listening to it ... that echoey synth is really cool! Nice progression too. One thing missing though, a thumpy bass drum. That would be really cool. It is really good the way it is, so you can just layer the kick over everything. And keep the beginning part w/o the kick for a about a minute as a kind of intro. The dual-voice effect over the drums is really cool. It gives it kind of a vocoder effect. And it's missing a little emphasis ... mabe add some pads over it too. Hey you know what? I kinda wanna remix this with a kick! I'm gonna get to work on it, but if you have any problem with posting it let me know ...Lithius3 Oct 2003, 01:02 Lithius3 Oct 2003, 01:06 I would call this genre "Progressive Hardcore House"Mel David3 Oct 2003, 01:13 :o Haha, that sounds mad. It's really rockin' with the best now! :DBALLISTIC SOLUTION3 Oct 2003, 10:37 heh heh... MEL DAVID- He Died With A Glowstick In His Hand (Lithus 10 minute mix)
i'm gonna burn a song tonight for you folks to play with...., btw i still like the track...BALLISTIC SOLUTION14 Oct 2003, 02:39 promote...,song, mel david