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Do you think that this could be released ?

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BuRo1 Mar 2004, 20:23
Hello this is my latest track, do you think that it could be released ?

http://www.audionet.sk/Mp3/Projekty/106442...nds_128kbps.mp3
Trancefuzion1 Mar 2004, 21:46
I wish the closed hi-hats had a bit more of a high end to them. I don't care for your clap too much either. You could add some reverb (maybe even gated reverb) to it to phatten it up a bit. It also might sound good to lower pitch of the sample a bit. 3 minutes into it... I'm still waiting for a main theme...

The synth that comes in about 3:30-40 should be a bit louder I think. You might want to add a bit of attack as well as some reverb to your main lead... it sounds a bit too "abrupt" if you know what i mean.

Overall: Its alright. Didn't care for it as much as "Forever and For Everyone" the melody seems way too simplistic and the bassline probably should change along with the main lead. IMHO the overal progression of the track is waaaaay too long, but it does seem to fit with the name... like its something you would play while on the highway.

This track could really be banging with some work. I hope you keep doing that because I see some good potential in it. :)

Have you considered registering on the forums here? We'd be happy to have you as a member. :)
Digital Beat3 Mar 2004, 15:29
quite a decent track. Perhaps a little reverb to claps. Some re-arrangement to the theme. Shorter intro. Overall, the mix sounds good and stereo image is ok. At least i cannot say much with my desktop speakers how the bass and mid-range should be.
Ambient Soundscape4 Mar 2004, 12:51
This is quality sounding and im only 3:19 into the track, nicely mastered as everything sounds crisp as. The breakdown was fantastic justice for this build up.

Can I ask what you used in terms of hardware, software?

10/10 :devil2:
Guest4 Mar 2004, 23:29
It's a very nice song, i enjoyed listening t it, il have to give you a 9/10, its great but theres just a couple things i personally don't like all that much, but they dont' hinder the overall greatness of the track.

and yah, could you tell us what software, hardware, u used to make it... cuz im new and i wanna start making trance as well... hopefully eventually as good as urs..