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I know it's been a wile...
some new poems/thoughs...
Started by lingk · 8 posts · 35 views · this thread in the Internet Archive
lingk4 Jan 2004, 06:27 1st one
- Forever I’ll be With You -
Like rain, tears fill my eyes from the broken heart you left in my hand... blood fills my floor as I lay awake trying to understand what all happen in a flash so bright it blinded me. A winter’s dusk has over come my life once again. No hope in site for the over looked. Can’t grasp the effects you had on me. Each thought is fading away like water on the sun. Running to catch what was lost in day’s life. Dreams seam to bring a reality that is more real then what is seen by eyes open to love. Take in a sole and only get regret in return. I stand alone on the edge of a life’s past looking at the dust in the wind of our love forgotten.
2nd one
- This and That -
Something new, something old,
Something I can’t lay my hands on.
One thing, one person, but yet something that I don't have,
Something that I will never have,
I get by with the music of the world,
You can save me,
You don't care and don't see me.
When I talk you don’t listen,
When I see you, you look right through me.
It huts, but you don't care,
If only you could see,
My world spins to no end.
The hole in my life will never heal with out the care of your love.
When you open your eyes, I will be gone, and you will be alone,
With the hole,
I hope you cry as I did,
So you can know the pain I have felt.
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like always... feed back is always welcome... thanks all! have a great day/nightR3v0Lu7iOn 194 Jan 2004, 17:18 OMG the 2nd one is so touching and sad... nearly made me cry :cwy: . There both great tho :Dlingk4 Jan 2004, 23:54 R3v0Lu7iOn 19 wrote: OMG the 2nd one is so touching and sad... nearly made me cry :cwy: . There both great tho :D
hey thanks... :DLithius5 Jan 2004, 12:00 Ouch man ... sounds like a breakup :(
I really liked your second one too, man that one's powerful!
Keep it up,
MaxGuest5 Jan 2004, 16:07 lol reading the 2nd poem again just reminds me of my last relationship :)You don't care and don't see me.
When I talk you don’t listen,
When I see you, you look right through me.
It hurts, but you don't care,
hehe, anyway keep em comin. :DR3v0Lu7iOn 195 Jan 2004, 16:08 woops 4got to log in :Dlingk6 Jan 2004, 05:03 wow! thanks guys...
you would think it's a brake up.. but most of the time i just open word... and just type and stuff comes out... lol i guess it's a talent of some sortLithius8 Jan 2004, 06:13 heheh, cool. Imagination at it's best.
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