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- Roses of Life -

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1. lingk25 Sept 2003, 16:44
   - Roses of Life -
   
   Dark cold nights, life is so sweet. Nothing seam wrong and nothing is right. Times like this is what I live for, the passion of the moment. Doing things at the spur of the wind with the one that your not suppose to love but can’t help it. Hiding from every one and being right out in the open. Can you see that your faults and my rights equal each other out, it’s too right, but oh so wrong in the eyes every one. The love is strong, and we will always be around. Nothing is better then you under a full moon on the foggiest night of the year. The rain is cold and we are so warm, it’s the best time of our lives. Time is what we will always have, next to each other we lay and say I love you. This is how I end this with a smile on my face and a thought of you, you will be here soon, and we will spend the years in each others arms
2. David McGowan25 Sept 2003, 17:37
   This is a very nice poem. Im not really on emuch for poems but i could really feel this one. Sounds like you have someone special in your lfe, and it seams like nothing is a better feeling ( except creating a really banging track!! oops did i say that out loud?)
   
   David
3. lingk25 Sept 2003, 17:58
   lol, yeah I know what you mean, and I use to have someone, but I haven't for a long time.. that stuff is kinda easy, and well my friends and i are kinda working on putting a band together.. so. need the stuff
4. Dj-M25 Sept 2003, 21:09
   Im not into poems much. But that was defenetly a good one. Some deep stuff there. keep it up!!
   
   
   Dj-M
5. lingk27 Sept 2003, 18:13

   Dj-M wrote: Im not into poems much. But that was defenetly a good one. Some deep stuff there. keep it up!!
   
   
   Dj-M

   
   hey, thanks, I have a lot more on my crapy website.
6. Tim29 Sept 2003, 20:53
   Pretty good poem, nice to use in a song!
   
   Keep em comming!
   
   Tim
7. Mel David7 Oct 2003, 04:56
   Wow, that poem would sound great being spoken with some atmospheric rain hitting the pavement effects. I can picture the scene too. You write beautifully. Keep it up.
8. MiGhTy-MaX14 Oct 2003, 01:15
   Deep... very deep. That's the best thing about poetry... It can make one think...